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Chance Encounter

She sizzled softly through the crowd white grin exuding cheer between the lines it read: please don't see what's not here   He  caught her eye and flashed a grin carefully monitoring suave and charm between the lines it read: tenderhearted, please don’t harm   She glided softly through her mind thoughts of him and more could he? would he? her heart unwind? wondering...was this...amor?   He whistled softly to himself as he headed out the door sated by white grin cheer, thinking when it's time she'll show me more ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ collaboration with John Wulf

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Date: 9/22/2011 1:22:00 PM
This is good story telling. there are so many ways to see into these characters that the readier is invited to become part of the story. Tony
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:24:00 AM
That was a very gentle piece, they're often full of the zap and zing of electric instant love, this is a very pleasing alternative. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:04:00 AM
Nice one, NJ. The world is full of such people. Keep it up.
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Date: 9/22/2011 12:18:00 AM
It's simplicity enhances the beauty of this poem. It actually warmed my heart, though only a bit, reading this. And I can be a harsh critic.
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