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Chamber Music

In his arms he held me to him Cradling my neck and body Running his fingers Arousing my notes Caressing with his bow He mastered his movements Positioning me gently Loving me so Sweet music he played me The passion it moved me And built screaming crescendo When we danced so slow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/13/2018 5:24:00 PM
Hi Anna-Marie! So nice to see you posting new poetry again. I do love the way an instrument like a violin seems to create an atmosphere of romance. Very good use of personification, Hon! It is beastly hot here in Florida now. Perhaps you are enjoying some nicer weather. Sending love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/6/2018 1:26:00 PM
Sexy with the personification here. I really like this.
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:22:00 PM
Romantic perfection!
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Anna-Marie Docherty
Date: 7/5/2018 3:13:00 AM
Hi Lyric Man - great to see you here too! Thank you for your kindness and commenting.

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