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Chains of Love

The chains of love do have you bound Joy inside of you is no longer real The life within is hardly found The chains of love do have you bound Your friends are no longer around I do know just how this pain feels Joy inside of you is no longer real The chains of love do have you bound

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2012 10:25:00 AM

finding love and falling out of love seem to change one, these chains are that feeling. and your poem is a wonderful emotional account of that.. i really like this Linda

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 9/9/2012 10:09:00 PM

Ooh, nice portrayal of unhappiness at the loss of love in a relationship that looks less than happy, good use of repetition, and the form looks like nice chain links.