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Chained

Chained Winged, winking devils dance on onyx tinted wings entice burnt appendages so broken inside rib cage Unable to fly out of this hell hole a shadow lifted nevermore a touch as cold as night lures steel cuts knees buckle, locked down nowhere to run from Rusted chains tighten each new link pierces, digs deep the heart's flesh not enough mercy to shred apart desire kept it beating just ....this must be what love is bound in arms blinded souls cannot escape Tormented visions a dark cloud silhouette spinning around the sun ravished by chaos an ancient evil curse arises within shadows suffering darkness inside embers burning with hot pain buried inside ashes Deeply rooted demonic forces spawn an evil eye turns evolving in bad deeds capturing the innocence of the human sacrifice one beast of an unclean spirit possessing love charms of a snake coils with lust putting a heart in chains attacking with wickedness Fallen angel filled up inside hate and pride cunningly from out of the ashes remains a demonic lapdog violating innocence Soul of impurities a shadow grows darker in every love that is taken unpure vessel when the eyes open to the dawning light A collaboration by Liam McDaid & Kelly Deschler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/11/2016 12:33:00 PM
Hi Liam, I'm sorry for not coming by to comment on our poem sooner. It is always a pleasure to write with you pal... I haven't been around much as I wanted to take a break from writing. But I am ready to get back at it... Thank you Dorian, James, Moon and Red for all of the nice comments!
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:12:00 AM
Excellent Collaboration.. And congrats to both of you for writing such a wonderful poem... A7... Cheers !!!
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:24:00 PM
This appears to me like a cryptic yet magical piece. Overall, a great collaboration. ;)
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Date: 6/10/2016 7:52:00 AM
Hi Liam! grand collab! "Soul of impurities" says it all....amazing work! thank Kelly for brilliance! jimbo
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:41:00 AM
Hi Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a very profound, and mostly dark n' sad poem that you've written here my dearest friend Liam and this time in collaboration with Kelly.A very deep and dark kind of poem, but very beautifully written.Awesome!Just dazzling!Excellent imagery! Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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