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Chain of Guilty Room

Run and run Run away from the sun The sun of pleasure and mourn which had done or undone Teary, weary rain Weary rain which washed me with this pain Pain of bad dreams which get staging on its stain Stuck in this guilty room The room that freeze by the gloom The gloom that lurks behind the luster of your bloom Future never be Never be like the things that we hope to see That we hope to see for free For everything happened with a price A price that unable to be changed or even with our rights Our rights which saved and sealed without a compromise For the life which stuck in a price

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/1/2013 7:42:00 PM
You captured the emotion well. This is a nice treat to read a new poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 8:20:00 AM
Sunny Okanagan day, on my way to work
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2013 7:45:00 PM
Hello Rick glad to see you around :D hope that you have a wonderful day there, and glad to have a comment by you :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/29/2013 1:25:00 PM
Dark, yet astounding atmosphere. This was truly excellent! Life always has a price.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/1/2013 10:40:00 AM
sure life always has a price yet it is beautiful :) thank you Drake, your comment is really uplifting :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/29/2013 9:48:00 AM
Yanny, my friend .... It is so sad ..... feels like you are so sorry ..... - A touching and well written poem. - Sending you a big hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/29/2013 9:52:00 AM
Sorry Anne I got switch suddenly while clicking the button, I don't know what brings me on this, it just flow right into my fingers :p wishing you a lovely Monday Anne, always be my pleasure to have a comment by you, hug, yanny
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/29/2013 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny
Date: 4/29/2013 9:42:00 AM
WOW. This is rich with descriptions and deeply felt. HAve a beautiful day!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/29/2013 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny

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