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Chain of Guilty Room

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Below is the poem entitled Chain of Guilty Room which was written by poet Yanny Widjanarko. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Chain of Guilty Room

Run and run 
Run away from the sun
The sun of pleasure and mourn which had done or undone

Teary, weary rain
Weary rain which washed me with this pain
Pain of bad dreams which get staging on its stain

Stuck in this guilty room
The room that freeze by the gloom
The gloom that lurks behind the luster of your bloom

Future never be
Never be like the things that we hope to see
That we hope to see for free

For everything happened with a price
A price that unable to be changed or even with our rights
Our rights which saved and sealed without a compromise 

For the life which stuck in a price

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:42:00 PM
    You captured the emotion well. This is a nice treat to read a new poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 5/2/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny Okanagan day, on my way to work
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/1/2013 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Rick glad to see you around :D hope that you have a wonderful day there, and glad to have a comment by you :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:25:00 PM
    Dark, yet astounding atmosphere. This was truly excellent! Life always has a price.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 5/1/2013 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    sure life always has a price yet it is beautiful :) thank you Drake, your comment is really uplifting :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:48:00 AM
    Yanny, my friend .... It is so sad ..... feels like you are so sorry ..... - A touching and well written poem. - Sending you a big hug / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/29/2013 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry Anne I got switch suddenly while clicking the button, I don't know what brings me on this, it just flow right into my fingers :p wishing you a lovely Monday Anne, always be my pleasure to have a comment by you, hug, yanny
    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/29/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:42:00 AM
    WOW. This is rich with descriptions and deeply felt. HAve a beautiful day!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 4/29/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny