Chador

Your eyes betray the pain within your womanhood to hide such beauty.

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Sharon Winter

Date: 1/30/2010 8:08:00 PM

happy birthday beautiful woman - may all your birthday dreams come true. love and miss you, shar xoxoxo

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/16/2009 5:02:00 AM

This is such a complete poem, it stands as a great example of the form ... a wonderful work of exquisite art

Date: 12/14/2009 6:50:00 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for your thoughts and prayers. Blessings to you. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2009 10:10:00 AM

The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Ms. Sue. Love, Carol

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 12/8/2009 9:43:00 AM

This is a beautiful Senryu Sue. :) Thanks for the typo fix!!! I love you for your sharp eye as well as talented mind. xoox