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Contest: Fairytale/Short Story Sponsor: Fire Bird

15 January 2024

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She went for the bowl in the middle Which sorted today’s lunchtime riddle Then she rested her head In a medium bed Till three hungry bears made her tiddle

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/22/2024 10:09:00 PM

A very short and sweet tale in limerick form. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2024 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun Limerick write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day/week..................

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2024 12:22:00 AM

Bet that fur made her itch like crazy lol. Tom

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/15/2024 7:56:00 PM

Have you entered this in the 'Original Tiddle' contest yet? ~ Crap E.N. Ding

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:40:00 PM

'made her tiddle'--hilarious. You truly have a gift of humor. Thank you for this Limerick. I need to read something nonsensical this evening (I mean this in a good way) have a wonderful evening, Sara

Terry Flood
Date: 1/15/2024 4:55:00 PM

Well, Fire Bird did say ‘short’ and believe me… for me, five lines is short. Glad you enjoyed my nonsense ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2024 4:38:00 PM

hahaha love it:-) 'bear' with me whilst I digest the subtle humour here lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood
Date: 1/15/2024 4:53:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. It was this or ‘Old MacDonald had a plan’ but that was longer. Glad it gave you a giggle. Terry