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reflections On a Cottage Wall

Peaceful afternoon laziness Shyness escapes Irish Cream - In a coffee cup Thin strings of steam belly dance A mute black and white movie Jumps images of a passing life In a warm cottage, on a freezing purity She's all alone although the lobby is crowded Restless tourists looking for their identity On the top of a mountain, proud of their shinny skis The wall reflects her life and Charlie Chaplin's shoes Once new now with painful holes in the sole They made people laugh a careless, cruel laughter Acting with such ease as if real: the romance, the Dictatorship The New, foreign Times, the bars... Regardless of standard, acceptable height People laughed until THE END

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/10/2010 10:54:00 PM
The first three lines?...Awesome!! I also love that movie when Charlie is starving and cooks his shoes! He was a master at mixing humor with sadness, as you have done so well here...And the Marx Brothers rule!...Pure chaos and insane humor! - Tim
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Date: 4/3/2010 4:38:00 PM
great poetry right here good imagination
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Date: 4/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
oops,I did not mean to call you Carolyn,, I had just commented to her poem before seeing yours. Sorry about that! But you are the one who emailed me about your hubby, right? Please affirm. I hate when I screw up that way.
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Date: 4/2/2010 8:52:00 AM
Very enjoyable read, Carolyn. Great imagination to do your poem this way. Thanks for commenting on my blog though I could not give any such news for real! I left you a hotmail about your hubbie's awesome numbers. I recall a few other soups had the MAster number 11 before I reduced it to 2. I should have let them know, but I just read about it today in my numerology book. Luv,Andrea ps shinny should be shiny!
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:31:00 PM
Don't know why I got images of Hitler's daccha ... can't remember the name of it now but I see the porch with the walk/wall and somehow thats what I saw reading this ... sorry if thats offensive ... smile ... you are a wonderful writer, Iolanda and this is a very powerful write !!
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Date: 3/30/2010 11:53:00 PM
Great poem,excellent verses...enjoyed reading you this morning..Charma.
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Date: 3/29/2010 8:43:00 PM
Nice imagery and a good stream of consciousness !
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:15:00 AM
Lovely scenario Iolanda .. great descriptions in your lines of poetic beauty... hope your tooth is better and u are not in pain ..luv.. Linda-Marie...thankxxx for your blog comment.. my friend...luv..
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