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Centerless

We are very sorry to report to you that your particular maze has been constructed with a fatal flaw and is actually lacking a center So you will unfortunately not have the opportunity in this lifetime to experience the sense of success and accomplishment that others with perfectly created mazes will experience We hope this does not cause you too much undue distress confusion and pain Better luck next time ! NEXT!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
Hi Ingrid. Sounds like a grand opportunity to determine our own path and construct a center. Life is beautiful, Ingrid. Very thought provoking...... Robert.
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Date: 12/21/2013 7:31:00 AM
I like this one! Makes me think. Is this what happens when we let others determine our path, and base our success or failure on expectations of others?
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