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Cellophane Soul

She seemed somewhat sad So she slid Semi-comatose... ...Cellophane Soul screams Saran-wrapped Such subtle sorrow Semi-transparent Sweet, still sleep She succumbs slowly Sad Cellophane Soul Silent screams Suddenly strangled Suicide succeeds Suffering Cellophane Soul soars © 2011 Kevin Stock

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Date: 9/16/2011 8:07:00 PM

Creative way to share the tragedy of suicide. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen

Elizabeth Lepapa

Date: 9/16/2011 8:57:00 AM

good enjoyment on this.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kevin. Love, Carol

Kevin Stock

Date: 4/28/2011 1:14:00 PM

Thank you P..d

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2011 9:44:00 AM

it's not of form of haiku but this is a good write, really enjoyed, try free verse im not too sure on the form either,...p..d

Kevin Stock

Date: 4/25/2011 5:13:00 AM

I put Haiku on this, but it doesn't fit the true 5-7-5 format. Is there a better form description for this? I was thinking there was a form regarding a poems words all starting with the same sound, but not sure. I have not studied forms nor do I usually write according to a form, the poem usually dictates how it's written and I hope it fits into one of the forms on here as it seems important for some reason on this site. Help!