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Celestial War

unexploded shell soldiers trying to defuse silence now departs leaving them no time to lose heaven fights again with hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/25/2015 4:33:00 AM
Great pen George! Much enjoyed your tanka,dear friend. A 7! Thanks for sharing. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:39:00 PM
Hi Dorian, i do appreciate your kind comment on my poem. Thankyou so much. George.
Date: 3/24/2015 12:19:00 PM
Excellent Tanka George:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:34:00 PM
Hello Jan, so glad you liked this one. Thankyou. George.

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