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Celestial Twirl

Planets in orbit Some big and some small Beings from outer space Some named, others not Discoveries made Orbital spin Masterfully Perfect timing In retrograde Planets sway Comets fall Earth rotate Unflawed Refined Sphere Contest: The Universe Placed: 8th

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:12:00 PM

Congratulations Wilma, on your poem's worthiness in the top ten place. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on this nice and wonderful poem, Wilma

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 9:01:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:45:00 AM

nice one Wilma, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/16/2010 10:18:00 PM

Many congratulations on this well deserved win dear Wilma.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 8:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Wilma. Charles

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:18:00 PM

Congratulations on 8th place ~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/16/2010 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Wilma!! Enjoy it!! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:17:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:33:00 PM

Wonderful Wilma..congrats...BG

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:23:00 PM

Congratulation's Wilma on your fine win in Rick's contest. I echo Carolyn's comments big style >> James :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:45:00 PM

So glad to see your great poem in the winners' circle, Wilma! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/11/2010 4:21:00 AM

Soup Mail, Wilma!Ek wonder wat sal nog ondersoek word in die heelal! Hulle het reeds 'n tweede aarde gevind, maar te ver weg te wees deur die mens bereik. Geniet jou naweek! Al die beste .... Gert:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 8:10:00 AM

Awesome write, Wilma. You really work well in this form and I love the way you mention the "retrograde" and the refining of the spheres in space. Great poem for my favorites where it and you both belong. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/9/2010 7:54:00 AM

Job very well done. This form is taxing and you seem to do it effortlessly. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/9/2010 5:07:00 AM

enjoyed reading today! Thanks for your ongoing support for my craziness.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/8/2010 7:55:00 PM

Lwonerfully well done, Wilm. Lthis was a toughie. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 6:59:00 PM

A nice entry, Wilma. I really ought to try this one. Just don't know what "spin" to put on it. tee hee. Luv ya, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/8/2010 2:19:00 PM

oops?? too bad I told your brain already---:p

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/8/2010 2:11:00 PM

Very nice, Ms. Siren (see I am going back to the original you) & why are you still awake?? go to sleep! me I woke up about an hour ago lol...but I really liked how you used "sphere" here-- wonderful write on Rick's challenge!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2010 1:25:00 PM

nice one Wilma, i like the fourth line in the first stanza lol, cause it's of course true and crazy how there's alot not yet name'd, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2010 12:36:00 PM

A brilliant depiction of the Universe with your elegant words Wilma.. good luck in the contest by Rick... awesome piece..luv..

James Fraser

Date: 9/8/2010 10:08:00 AM

Kool poem Wilma, your portfolio is endless. It's a lovely day here today. I hope it's also with you >> James