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Celestial Fantasia

She awoke on a moving silver cloud, God’s winds, not even made one sound. Sail sweetly to your rainbow paradise. Gold sunscapes are your soul’s magic surprise. Under a silk umbrella painted with stars, Her jasmined, joy-spirit blessing Mars. Through dreamy mists, she serenely sailed. Winged poetess, you have never once failed! 8/2/2022 ~1~

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Date: 8/16/2022 1:03:00 PM
Your "CELESTIAL FANTASIA" is a creative/fun write. What a fun/magical trip I just took on your silver cloud. Have a fun/great/blessed day writing away..............
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2022 1:19:00 PM
Hi Paula! Oh so that was you I saw flying by my window, eh? Lol …thought you looked familiar! Glad you liked this and did let me know! You are a gift, you know? Hugs, Panagiota xx
Date: 8/2/2022 7:40:00 PM
This is beautifully written. Your poetry is a joy to read.
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Date: 8/3/2022 10:17:00 AM
Hello Elena and thank you for saying my poetry enjoyed to read! I did try my best to make it beautiful and thank you for saying so, Panagiota XXX
Date: 8/2/2022 7:34:00 PM
A poet you are my friend.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2022 10:14:00 AM
My dearest Eve, I wish I had the same confidence in my poetry that you do! I am very harsh with myself about my writing. I think everyone else is far better and I am at the bottom of the scale. This morning I thought about never writing again! I hope I get over Feeling like this. Panagiota XXX
Date: 8/2/2022 8:26:00 AM
What a trip! Thanks for the ride share, my poetess fair. Very creative I do declare. Nice imagery and a fun trip, Panagiota. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
Oh,great Bill! I don’t charge for these travels! . Glad the imagery was good, too. The space poetess, Panagiota xxx
Date: 8/2/2022 8:03:00 AM
You take the reader on a magical journey Pangie. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/2/2022 8:31:00 AM
Tom! I like your choice of words. How sweet. Thank you.. Panagiota xxx

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