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Celebration

blessings from above showers of pink blossom rain nature's confetti ** A spring senryu

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/25/2010 1:49:00 PM

yes! fine imagery! Sharon! jmg

De R

Date: 6/22/2010 5:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sharon! This is a wonderful senryu! Kisses, Emily

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Sharon. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 8:52:00 PM

I love the idea of the pink blossoms in the rain being looked at as confetti for nature. Wonderful image! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Date: 6/19/2010 1:18:00 PM

What an uplifting view. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on placing second in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2010 12:49:00 AM

btw, I thought I had faved you but just checked and discovered I had not. Sorry if I told you earlier and then forgot to do it. It's gonna go down right NOW.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/17/2010 10:45:00 AM

Congrat on your well deserved win,very original and beautiful Shar!C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2010 7:05:00 AM

Congratulation, Sharon. It was a shoe in! (what does that expression mean anyway? or is it shoo in? haha) YOu have got to try Rondeau. I have dozens and dozens of them now. I know from your style, you will adore them! LUv, Andrea

Amy Green

Date: 6/16/2010 9:48:00 PM

Very good one! Nature's confetti is a great line. congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 8:43:00 PM

Congrats Sharon on your success in my contest .. a very creative write... thankxxx for your support ..with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/16/2010 8:06:00 AM

Spring is in the air. I can see it clearly through the imagery in this poem. Great job! Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2010 9:42:00 PM

Delightful and pretty. And how nice you ALSO have a teddy bear sonnet. And do you have a sonnet on a stinky sink? I have one of those too. hahaha. I think I have a sonnet on everything under the sun! Thanks for the teddy bear tale! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2010 8:25:00 PM

A wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck, Sharon

Date: 6/15/2010 4:55:00 PM

What a lovely view. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2010 4:04:00 PM

What a beautiful haiku, Sharon! "Nature's confetti" is a great line. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2010 3:44:00 PM

Hi Sharon, Soup Mail for you >> James

James Fraser

Date: 6/15/2010 2:39:00 PM

Sharon, I have an apple tree in the garden and it's pink blossoms are just beautiful. The Japanese Sukara trees are also so beautiful, as is this Senyru >> James