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Ceaseless Orbit

Ceaseless Orbit Never a pause In the fluid motion Of the electric world Everything from emptiness Nothing is all we are But we are still made Of stars, you and I No such thing as Yesterday; tomorrow’s Promise is ruined by The eternal present When life’s flimsy mirage Is consumed by time All that is left – if Anything is left at all Is the memory of True unfettered ecstasy Eternity is found in life’s Orgasmic moments.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 3:09:00 PM
T.L. I have to concur with Gavin. You have written an exceptional piece here, and my wishes are for it to do well in the Soups contest >> James
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:27:00 PM
Thanks for the comments! I decided to enter this into the July Soup contest *fingers crossed*
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:12:00 PM
I love the way you use your words in this passionate poem. I enjoyed reading it today. Scarlett
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Date: 6/18/2010 1:34:00 PM
Really enjoyed this, brilliant choice of words, why has no one commented this? The best I have read on this website to date. Thanks for uploading. Regards, Gavin.
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