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Cease Fire

Suddenly without warning I saw you in the sky You were on a mission I thought I would cry You have no heart you filthy coward As you flew over our town I am a peaceful man I couldn’t shoot you down No one is safe as you fly by No man, no woman, no child You hit your targets consistently Even the statue at church was defiled Your aim is uncanny as you hit your targets below Precision bombing from afar You now have gotten on my last nerve You do it every time I wax my car.

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Brandy Megens

Date: 5/24/2009 9:14:00 AM

very funny buddy i thought it was on another level until the end great suspense

Jenny Sliger

Date: 5/20/2009 7:44:00 AM

Haha very nice!! I love how you never distinctly stated what the subject was until the very end. Nicely done!!

Kate Mcnaughton

Date: 5/19/2009 5:07:00 PM

I liked this poem, It made me laugh, It's very good.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/19/2009 1:03:00 AM

Woooow! This is another one. Hope they will STOP. Ernilando

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/18/2009 7:03:00 PM

I have come to the conclusion that birds can't control their exit places. Blame the wax "job" on the earths gravitational pull. tee hee hee-:)AA

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2009 10:08:00 PM

Nice write Vince, i was picturing a plane - then you sneaked up on me, with our feathered Stuka,s - James.

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/16/2009 4:42:00 PM

Vince, this is just awesome! I like the twist in the end. Thanks for the comment on the blog regarding my book. Have a great day. Blessings! ~Joseph

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2009 2:15:00 PM

ow my i read this two times,it is very funny,love this sense of humuor--cheers,consider it a lucky token from above;-)--charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/15/2009 1:34:00 PM

holy tomato! you flipped my emotions w/this cool write! sweeeeet! Jim

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/15/2009 1:32:00 PM

Vince You are too funny I love it you had me thinking you were going somewhere else ! lololo Laura :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 11:56:00 AM

~lol~ At least it didn't hit your head like Fred! Ha ha! This is hilarious! Love, Shar

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/15/2009 11:22:00 AM

Dive bomber? lmao nice job Vince this is great too but i absolutly ADORE your tribute before lol, Smiles and thank you for the comment [[im working on my self really, trying to feel better and smile and staty strong, going to finally get tested x), thanks for your support <3]] Jese

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/15/2009 10:47:00 AM

HA! Vince..how I have missed your funny. a dive-bomber, eh? get out the BB gun, vince is out for revenge! lol loved this, love, Kristin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2009 8:51:00 AM

This is outrageously funny, Vince! Every time I go to the beach deposits are on my car. One made a deposit on our Homecoming Queen in high school. Everyone laughed but the queen herself. A great write that goes straight to my faves. Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/15/2009 8:37:00 AM

Yup , Vince I've been there ... Yes sireee , sat there , to be shat-upon . They say that the difference between a banker and a pigeon , is that the feathered-one , can still put a deposit on a BMW !!! Shine on , Shine on harvest-bum , up in the sky ... Damn , Vince , now you got me started !!!! ..

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/15/2009 8:29:00 AM

LOL...LOL....those friggin birds will do it all the time..you have a great sense of humor...they are building a nest on my porch..friggin birds.

Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 5/15/2009 8:19:00 AM

Ha ha ha. I remember going to church a few months ago to attend service and when I was walking neath a tree, something moist fell on my head. I learned first-hand how it felt to be in the receiving end of a carpet bombing! Fred

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2009 8:11:00 AM

Very amusing Vince.Thanks for for welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian.Have good weekend cleaning the car !

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 8:09:00 AM

Yep....that same dad-gum winged bomber gets around our town too......, over our house, the lantern on the post coming up our sidewalk looks like snow-topped Mt Everest!