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Caves of Sorrow

In my dark deep caves of sorrow I have the walls painted with tears, Lonely I stand there with no hope Tormented with unwanted fears. Restless regrets roam and reside In my dark deep caves of sorrow, I exist as withered autumn There is no spring for tomorrow. Roses, reminded me of you Now uprooted since you were gone, In my dark deep caves of sorrow My life is caged has not moved on. With broken heart I feel disturbed Some peace I wish, I could borrow, Ashes of faith are now buried In my dark deep caves of sorrow. This poem has been published in 2019 in my poetry collection "Far in the Meadows and other poems" by Meenakshi Raina CONTEST 208 any form, any topic max of 16 lines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Poem written on: August 4, 2016.

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Date: 9/21/2016 9:46:00 AM
Such a beautiful, heartfelt Quatern, Meenakshi. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/21/2016 7:42:00 AM
Meenakshi- love this, my face in the contest :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/19/2016 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Meenakshi on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:34:00 PM
Meenakshi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem ~
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Date: 9/14/2016 4:11:00 AM
Very well written poem. Congrats on your win, Meenakshi.
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Date: 9/14/2016 2:39:00 AM
Wonderfully written! Congratulations on a most deserving win Meenakshi. ; ) 7
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:12:00 PM
Congrats on your well written poem, Meenashki! Great job :)
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Date: 9/13/2016 5:20:00 PM
Very nice quatern Meenakshi, sorrow can be difficult, I wrote a similar one about depression, congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/13/2016 5:03:00 PM
so lovely to see this get such a great placement in this contest Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2016 4:21:00 PM
very beautiful Meenakshi, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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