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Caves

Caves truth as tiny drops of water hangs onto roofs, waiting to nurture thoughts creeping on dark floors, Strange mind caves... till flash of bright sunlight traverses through, for negativity to vanish and sets dormant ideas aglow, Strange mind caves ... Written August 5th, 2016 For contest "Caves" Judged on Aug 7th, 2016 Awarded N/A Now entered for contest "Take the dagger from my heart please" Sponsor- Broken wings

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Daniel Turner

Date: 9/6/2016 8:15:00 AM

I'm sorry I missed this one. This is a marvelous write. I think my brain isn't getting enough sun. Sorry I missed your poem, Doc. Nice to read you again. I enjoy your poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2016 9:21:00 PM

You did a really nice job interpreting the theme, Dr.Upma. Very nice indeed.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 3:34:00 PM

I love your creative take on this cave theme, Upma. Fortunately a positive beam of bright light finds its way into your 'cave'! gl in the contest:) Regards // paul

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/5/2016 5:01:00 PM

Well written great poem xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 8/5/2016 8:43:00 AM

Love this clever write for the contest Dr. Sharma!:) G/L in it!:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/5/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thnx for ur kind words n wishes dear Cheryl