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Caves

They spend their time in the caves, keeping themselves warm around bonfires, while narrating stories of how the outside world is dangerous. The bonfires are always existent, as long as the cave dwellers keep on saying how the outside world is dangerous. Fear of the outside world has always kept them warm, with a sense of protection. Bats, rats and echoes is all they know in the caves. They don't know any oceans, skies, sun, seasons, grass..... They only know what's inside the caves; shelters for their insecurities. Some people from the outside world have tried to remove them from the caves, but with little or no success. Fears that are in their thoughts are afraid of fading into the fresh, vast, liberating space of the outside world. Comfort of the bonfires' warmth keep the cave dwellers closely knit, as they feed their fears with narratives that only exist in their imaginations....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/3/2016 6:03:00 AM
a very interesting take on the topic, Teddy. This would never have crossed my mind. So unique!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/3/2016 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, for your compliment!!! *^_^*
Date: 8/2/2016 11:02:00 AM
Loved this, Teddy. Such a strong metaphor, and so very pertinent. Agnes
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/2/2016 3:38:00 PM
Hi Agnes. Thanks for passing by to comment on my piece, and enjoy it!! *^_^*
Date: 8/1/2016 4:53:00 AM
Very well written ... Will they never be a part of the mainstream ... and like us look to the stars and dream? ...
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Date: 8/1/2016 4:38:00 PM
I wonder too Probir.... Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece!! ;-)

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