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Cave of Darkness

This cave of darkness, Is what I now call home. My memory of light, hen Slowly fades each day. I was banished here, to darkness, When you left and took the light. My life since then, Has no meaning. I no longer feel, Just go through the motions. All that holds me here, Is a faint whisper of your voice. Yet, i'm blinded by this darkness, All the pain, hut, and lies. I cant believe this was the meaning of life. In my cave of darkness, There isn't a speck of light. I'm lost don't know where to start. I know my only chance is you. But will you come back into my life? And lead me to light. Will you lighten this cave? And show me the way? Take me back to once we came. Grant me forgiveness, On my worst days. And I promise to protect you, On your cold and lonely days. All I ask of you, Please rescue me from. This Darkened Cave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/24/2015 6:08:00 PM
AUSTIN. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Date: 7/21/2015 9:05:00 AM
Sounds like some flirt has your heart! Great write! Congrats on your win Austin ...it looks like you are new welcome to poetry soup. I am also pretty new and have had tons of fun and found much inspiration and support from super nice people! Hope you have as much fun here as I have. ~ lee
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:37:00 PM
Strong write, well done. Viv
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:15:00 PM
Wasn't sure how this fit in with the flirting prompt, unless it held deeper meaning, I was looking for some fun, flirty write, but this was interesting enough to put on the win list. Keep penning.
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Date: 7/14/2015 2:22:00 AM
Hi Austin,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/13/2015 11:15:00 PM
Awesome poem Austin, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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