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Deep down hidden! Silence!! As loneliness formed beauty, Centuries of creativity, Ebbing and flowing, Sometimes so soft and gentle, Others violently thrashing waters, Against the rocks of time, As the sea etches away in secret, Forming and designing, Diamond cuttings! Art forming patterns, Nature hid her extravagance, Unseen by human eyes, For thousands of years Until her unveiling day, When daylight enters, Sun revealing colors, Sculptured with magnificent shapes, That make people bow their heads in honor, As standing on holy ground. When entering this cave! 02/08/2016

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Date: 8/9/2016 5:11:00 AM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/9/2016 6:31:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis xxx
Date: 8/8/2016 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/8/2016 1:59:00 PM
thank you Joseph
Date: 8/7/2016 10:23:00 AM
A lovely take on the theme, Wendy. Congratulations on your nice placement in the 'caves' Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/7/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra yours was a great poem xxx
Date: 8/6/2016 10:07:00 AM
Love the third line Wendy...great write...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/6/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 8/3/2016 4:11:00 PM
Hi Wendy, This a good entry for the contest. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/4/2016 2:33:00 AM
Thank you Alexis x
Date: 8/2/2016 10:41:00 AM
Great write, I really love the Imagery . All the best for the contest . smiles *Ron*
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Ronny xxxxx
Date: 8/2/2016 6:24:00 AM
That's exactly how it works Wendy. Add a little wind from a hole somewhere and then you get the magnificent caves. Excellent write!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel xxxxxx
Date: 8/2/2016 6:10:00 AM
Unique take on the theme Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Jan xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 8/2/2016 5:45:00 AM
Nice one, good luck in the contest.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 8/2/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Ronald xxxx

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