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Caught In the Sun

On the beach,as sun glazes with pleasure, Gentle touch on my back makes me feel glee, Then came darkness with storm of great measure, Legs move ; water rises; This baffles me , as my date becomes the late by a tree. CONTEST:"A CATCH-PHASE DAZZLER" Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 7:59:00 PM
Except for the last line, I really did like this one, Olusequn. Thanks for supporting my contest!
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Date: 1/2/2013 12:50:00 PM
lovely write - congrats : )
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Date: 12/26/2012 4:17:00 AM
enjoyed this olusegun.. lovely little poem...
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