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Caught In My Mind

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Caught In My Mind

A blessed cloud moves overhead
I watch its journey
I watch it change shape
Blend into whatever vision I need it to be

Monumental time on my hands
Seperated by blue skies
You're caught in my mind
But soon you'll be back here with me

Meaning seems to fall by the way
The day can be whatever it wants
It makes no sense to wake up
When you are not a moment in grace

You're caught in my mind
Every moment captured 
Freezed framed and on pause
My heart has relied on this place




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  1. Date: 8/29/2009 11:36:00 AM
    Funny where the heart goes when our loved ones are away, wonderful poem Jo. Thank you for your lovely comments also. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 4:17:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jo. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 2:28:00 PM
    Love the descriptive writing. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 1:57:00 PM
    Beautiful write Jo, i loved to look at clouds when i was younger, still do in fact. Make out shapes. Pretend the clouds were lands and the skies the water, my those were the days. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem>>James

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 1:01:00 PM
    What a heartfelt expression of love and longing, Jo. Time seems to stand still when you are waiting for your love to return. Beautiful imagery adds much to the excellent write. Love, Carolyn