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Caught In My Mind

A blessed cloud moves overhead I watch its journey I watch it change shape Blend into whatever vision I need it to be Monumental time on my hands Seperated by blue skies You're caught in my mind But soon you'll be back here with me Meaning seems to fall by the way The day can be whatever it wants It makes no sense to wake up When you are not a moment in grace You're caught in my mind Every moment captured Freezed framed and on pause My heart has relied on this place

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 8/29/2009 11:36:00 AM

Funny where the heart goes when our loved ones are away, wonderful poem Jo. Thank you for your lovely comments also. ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/28/2009 4:17:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jo. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2009 2:28:00 PM

Love the descriptive writing. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2009 1:57:00 PM

Beautiful write Jo, i loved to look at clouds when i was younger, still do in fact. Make out shapes. Pretend the clouds were lands and the skies the water, my those were the days. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem>>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2009 1:01:00 PM

What a heartfelt expression of love and longing, Jo. Time seems to stand still when you are waiting for your love to return. Beautiful imagery adds much to the excellent write. Love, Carolyn