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Caught In Between

Conflicting are familial ties that bind As my activist brother once declared This summon for probing, he declined In a crucial time when revolts had snared Our birthmark of freedom, then endangered. Harder the choice for Dad caught in between Love for son and a general’s duty; As nights set to embark on our planned scheme Father hid my sibling across a far sea, Believing in our home’s earned dignity. ………….. My brother was a college student and leader of an activist movement during the People Power Revolution in our country. Though under suspicion for violent acts, we all knew he was innocent, especially my father. Dr. Ram Mehta’s Hard Choices Contest by nette onclaud

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Date: 7/5/2014 9:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette,with this fine poem.Family first and foremost,well done
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Date: 7/4/2014 11:33:00 AM
Nette, such difficult situations keep arising. Having faith in near and dear ones, if innocent, helps in taking a good decision. Congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:53:00 AM
wonderful win Nette... PD
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:22:00 AM
Wow, such intrigue. There are alot of ways a family can get torn apart. Nice when it sticks together. Congrats.
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:53:00 AM
Great write indeed ,, choice was real hard ,, story of exceptional courage,, congrats on big win !
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:20:00 AM
A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, nette
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Date: 7/1/2014 9:22:00 PM
Oh my goodness, this is such a difficult choice made ......so many of us take for granted the things many endure to ensure a way of life that is free, safe, and honest. What an amazing story, Nette!
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Date: 7/1/2014 5:08:00 PM
Well executed English Quintain, Nette. You tell of an intriguing part of your family life. Yes, a hard choice had to be made then! gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 7/4/2014 3:22:00 PM
Back again with congratulations; I'm glad and honoured to be standing next to you on the same podium:)
Date: 6/30/2014 6:49:00 PM
way to keep it real in the field. HOLDIN' it down for the family. Cool how blood sticks together Huh? ! Nette Pot!:)
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:53:00 PM
Yikes so hard for all you, brother & father, glad all are safe! Light & Love
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:52:00 PM
very strong and very real
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:58:00 PM
This is a great poem of hard choices. It is also great for the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:47:00 PM
Wow nette what a hard time for you family..I hope everything turned well...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:38:00 PM
Nette, this poem may well be the point where most of us find ourselves deciding on a difficult situation,. A purposeful, stirring read where family unity and love reign over societal struggle.Wonderful!
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:23:00 PM
Wow, Nette. Thank you for sharing a snippet of your life with us. This was quite a hard time for your family. In the civil war in Lebanon, brother fought brother. A very sad time for us all.....Lovely poem. Good luck on contest.
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