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Caught In a Haze

The grey oppresses; surrounded by fog, I traverse this shadowland; Dorothy in reverse, stuck in this land of monochrome Xerox grayscale in 2-D. Hoping it is but a dream, valiantly, I stroke in Technicolor Only to see it erased, again It is no more real than the specters haunting my thoughts. Still I stumble around searching; hues of hope hover out of reach as these low-lying clouds cast a pall-- blinding me to joy. Perhaps, I'm trapped in Tim Burton's sketch board; these monoliths of grotesque caricature evidence such. At every turn there is a new one, popping out of the mists. Large, unmoving blocks of black granite ring me like Stonehenge-- surrounded-- Leaving me wandering this maze of dark surrealism. Glimpses of color reveal themselves in the distance through the shroud, ephemera teasing my senses. Blow! benign zephyrs; sweep away the haze invading my peace. Rescue me the confines of my self-induced prison. Let me walk in daylight, once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/28/2015 8:59:00 AM
I fight my depression by writing my friend, seems I always have done so. At age 15 I started seriously writing poetry after my father's death. Adding this poem to my fav list because its just that good! A7
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 11/28/2015 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Robert. Writing seems to help, doesn't it? My grey days are pretty unpredictable and never last very long. I always know I'll be popping out of it when I can write. This was written a bit before Halloween.
Date: 10/6/2015 5:25:00 PM
Very deep dark and sad Janet:-( hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/7/2015 4:08:00 AM
Unless you have suffered you can't imagine the pain! I was so bad got sent to A & E - they gave me oral morphine ... it didn't touch the pain - its easing now thankfully! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 10/6/2015 11:32:00 PM
Hugs! I've been there! Once you learn the stretches, it will help! Ive had it of and on since I was pregnant with my oldest. I can tell you for sure that it can be worse than labor pains. I tried to convince the doctor if he removed my leg, having the baby would be easy! He laughed and ordered the epidural. Stupid man didn't realize I was serious! Once they get you going yet yoga stretches!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2015 5:47:00 PM
Oh Janet I am sorry you are struggling - I am struggling too with sciatica - I have never had it before and the pain is intense - can't wait to get back on my feet properly and start physio on Thursday lets hope brighter days are around the corner for us both:-) hugs jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 10/6/2015 5:32:00 PM
Life has not been kind, or much fun lately, but the weather will change soon. Life never stands still, so I'm hoping things are better around the next corner. ~Jan

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