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Caught By a Train

I was caught by a train yesterday I hear people say this often in exasperation exaggerated tones with over-dramatic groans as if the train somehow physically captured them in its large mechanical grasp diabolically refusing to let them go Yesterday I was caught in a different way imagination captured, you might say captivated charmed and enchanted by the passing art display Something about the way vibrant, vivid colors unexpectedly splashed out on moving canvas of rust red and dull gray traveling fast across the city feisty train talking smack with tags and words amusing, witty strange, disturbing, edgy, gritty grinding down the tracks Sometimes shocking- artfully rendered obscenities or surprisingly endearing cartoon creatures manga characters from overseas expressed with impressive expertise and ingenuity As other drivers sat nearby fussing, fuming missing the show pawing their floorboards like impatient horses hands gripping wheels ready to go- I watched the trains in constant childlike wonder and delight for those twenty minutes of my day two trains gone by, one each way ...Then watched the other cars rolling through still red flashing lights as soon as crossing arms were lifted halfway rushing, roaring trying to make up the time that was “taken” by the railway

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Date: 11/18/2018 7:59:00 PM
You are so descriptive. I really love this one about watching trains. You shine new light on topics we take for granted. I gotta see if you are on my favored poets' list because you sure deserve to be and sometimes I forget to put people on it right away
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/18/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much!!! Your comment just made my day! ;)
Date: 10/29/2018 6:26:00 PM
Sometimes, at night, I can hear the trains distantly, and their music has shaped my dreams - thanks for this reminder -
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/30/2018 4:52:00 AM
You're welcome! ;) Yes, I can hear the trains from my house, too... and it is a sort of musical sound to 'shape your dreams'- thanks for the lovely comment!
Date: 10/27/2018 11:36:00 PM
I loved the way you threw in such wonderful action verbs, and pieces of yourself in feeling this poem. It went to my FAV list. I went back to try and highlight the things I liked best and I had highlighted every line, so that was too long right?
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/28/2018 1:00:00 PM
Hahahaha- I have that problem, too... these comment boxes are just too small! ;D So glad you enjoyed this, my friend! I had so many other poems to finish yesterday, but this one wouldn't leave me alone until it was put on paper!

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