Caught

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Cought by your dreams kept in my mind spread by the spiritis allover my senses. Caught by the wind spread to the prairies to be ashes on the soil. Touched by your nude words whispering nonsense to be playing your magic with me. I'm a hidden card in your sleeve, nothing for the others to see. Caught by you I will never be myself but another card to be played under your coat

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 2:57:00 PM

It's so sad that many, if not most of the people in this world are chained by someone are something. We were all born to be free but by the choices of the majority, we've have virtually enslaved ourselves in a world that should be free. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, Maria. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/28/2023 3:50:00 PM

Yes Bill, so much slaveness in the world.. Love you pass by me.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/24/2023 5:17:00 AM

Loved the idea of being chained in life. You must play the game in the right way to achieve happiness.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/24/2023 5:33:00 AM

Yes, indeed. Thanks for your comment.xxx