Catfish

Cautiously I wade Through shallow waters at dawn Minnows tickle me My fishing hole waits for me catfish jump with the sunrise

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Judy Ball

Date: 3/20/2012 3:07:00 PM

Nicely done with good imagery. Thanks so much for your comments on my ABC poem. Don't think it matters much that the last two letters of the alphabet didn't get used. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 11:12:00 PM

I LOVE this one. So natural and concrete with its images. Is it in the contest I hope?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/19/2012 4:23:00 PM

an expressive Tankka with fantastic imagery flowing.. we did a little fishing down the seashore last year.. so fun.. good luck in contest Rhonda luv..

Ann Roske

Date: 3/19/2012 11:50:00 AM

reminds me of the early morning runs in the boat on the lake... thanks for the memory!