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Caterpillar Wishes

Caterpillar Wishes She sat in a lonely field crying amidst daises wishing for her smile, when along crawled a green caterpillar She cradled it tenderly in her hands and between tear drops made a wish… the caterpillar glistened as she suddenly sprouted colorful wings and happily flew away from the cocoon of sadness that had held her… with her new found friend by her side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/19/2016 6:47:00 AM
A joy to read, Chris - lovely and touching with sweetness ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so very much CayCay
Date: 12/16/2016 1:03:00 PM
That made me smile. that third stanza has so much hidden meaning and so much unsaid!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren. Happy it made you smile.
Date: 12/16/2016 11:36:00 AM
Hi Chris, This is so beautiful. I enjoyed your metaphors and amazing imagery.I saw a friendship unfold right before my eyes.Well done. A without doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis for always leaving such wonderful comments for me. Friendships are the jewels of our lives. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/16/2016 11:00:00 AM
This one is very special! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thank you so much my sweet friend.

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