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Caterpillar

caterpillar dreams of wings and sweet nectar - while munching tough leaves

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/5/2016 11:56:00 AM

Beautiful contrasts. Always a great pleasure to read your works. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2013 12:31:00 AM

Nice image here. The contrast of him with his butterfly to be.

David De La Croes
Date: 6/14/2013 1:04:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Andrea. One can also relate the image to human endeavor... David

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/28/2013 10:30:00 AM

This is splendid. I wrote a much longer piece- Butterfly- A Glosa from caterpillar to butterfly/ and you capture it all in 3 beautiful lines LOL Still I think it is one of the profound lessons of youth - knowing about metamorphosis, Thanks for stopping by my page today I was wondering how you are. Love SuZ

David De La Croes
Date: 5/29/2013 12:36:00 AM

Thanks for your comment, and for missing me :) , SuZ. I've read your poem and found new appreciation and insight of life's development around us. Stay well. David.

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/22/2013 3:44:00 AM

Sweet one :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/22/2013 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Sasha! Glad you like it... David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2013 1:51:00 AM

- First class haiku David, beautifully! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/22/2013 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for your comments and well-wishes, Anne-Lise! HAve an awesome day! David