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Castles In the Sand - Collaboration With Darren White

Collaboration with Darren White Fog rises, mist clouds thoughts, Logic fails, reasoning in disarray Internal terror permeates the day It's inner peace I seek to find I created a safe haven Where I can go to when I must Whenever the world gets too loud I have my castle in the sand Where I can finally let down Walls, meticulously built around My thoughts, myself, my heart Where I can be who I can't be outside Just castle walls remain, cool against my back, warm in sunlight soft, gentle around my trembling self, stern against the world outside Sharing it's strength with me Empowering me to dare Giving me the peace I need Freeing me from my own self *** January 29, 2017 Darren White Claudia Polydoro

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Date: 2/7/2017 6:40:00 PM
Maybe we will meet there one day :))
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/7/2017 7:07:00 PM
Yes!!! that'll be great :)
Date: 1/29/2017 5:48:00 PM
So beautiful and uplifting - a wonderful collaboration Claudia and Darren:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/30/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Jan!!! I loved writing it with Darren :)
Date: 1/29/2017 2:35:00 PM
Simply beautiful...A lovely dance of words
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/29/2017 3:14:00 PM
thank you Tim! :)
Date: 1/29/2017 1:16:00 PM
We made a wonderful poem together <3 :)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/29/2017 1:33:00 PM
we did, didn't we??? <3 :) - love writing with you :)

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