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Castle On a Hill

Castle On A Hill I saw a magnificent castle on a hill Its towers up high piercing the clouds Conical roofs with slight golden shimmer Brilliantly covered with a sunny shroud But the walls looked old and tarnished And the big metal portcullis was rusted The moat was definitely all dried up And the ditch was grime-crusted I wonder if anyone lives up there If there is a princess on one of the towers I'd like to be her knight and rescue her If only I could climb above that flimsy bower But this castle looked way too old And abandoned as it lost its glory My fairytales had a different picture They did not look this profane in the stories Instead it looks like one of those castles They show in horror movies and cartoons With a thundery night, full moon and a wolf howling Housing a big frightening buffoon Yes, that must be it Its nothing but a scary old mansion I'm glad I didn't linger there long So much for a monumental attraction. 20/04/2016

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:53:00 PM
Sohini, congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 5/2/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank u so much Linda :)
Date: 5/1/2016 3:45:00 AM
Very good write well written xxxx congrats
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 5/2/2016 5:49:00 AM
Thank u so much! :)
Date: 4/27/2016 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Love, Joyce
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so mich :)
Date: 4/27/2016 1:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 4/27/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Sohini on the placement of the contest.
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Sohini Mukherjee
Date: 4/27/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank u so much :)

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