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Castle On a Hill

Castle on a Hill Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Chateau with elevation inclined on top of the knoll Ascending into the citadel where the Prince reads his scroll Sloping down toward the guards who need to patrol Tower laying on the highest bluff for all the land to see Lady Isabelle, so beautiful with sparkling eyes, I’d agree Eminence of dwellers bowing down to the manor's decree
This castle looks like it was made perfect and built for a King, the height carries a fortress for all the land dwellers to see, the rising of the orb skyline compliments the coming of Spring a perfect home for a princess…and now a family of three.
~Date Written: April 20, 2016~

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Date: 5/1/2016 4:06:00 AM
Congrats well written xx
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:20:00 AM
Luloo it is a great poem ! Congrats on your wonderful placement!
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:33:00 AM
thank you Balveen! :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations Laura!
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Date: 4/28/2016 8:06:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, luloo! :)
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Date: 4/28/2016 11:32:00 AM
thank you Moon Flower (I love your name ) -luloo :)
Date: 4/27/2016 2:04:00 PM
I will congratulate you on your placement, Laura.
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Date: 4/27/2016 2:38:00 PM
many thanks lady :)-luloo
Date: 4/27/2016 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2016 2:38:00 PM
thank you Joyce :)-luloo
Date: 4/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/27/2016 1:00:00 PM
BL, many thanks :)-luloo
Date: 4/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
Back to congratulate you, Luloo, on your well-deserved placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/27/2016 1:00:00 PM
many thanks Sandra, right back atcha! Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 4/27/2016 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
thank you Nayda very much :)-luloo
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
sorry I just saw this comment! Many thanks-luloo :)
Date: 4/25/2016 7:10:00 PM
Lovely 'castle on a hill' poem, Luloo. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:16:00 PM
Laura, great write for the contest, I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 4/22/2016 8:07:00 AM
thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 4/21/2016 4:04:00 PM
very fine read with a babe to complete the story, lou... huggs!
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Date: 4/21/2016 4:24:00 PM
thank you Nette:)-luloo
Date: 4/21/2016 7:55:00 AM
Great write:) all the best :)
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:14:00 PM
many thanks Jo :)-luloo
Date: 4/20/2016 11:50:00 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:13:00 PM
thank you Ravi :)-luloo
Date: 4/20/2016 10:55:00 PM
Wow! Great job, I love this piece!:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/21/2016 9:07:00 AM
I just realized your name is in it!!! Beautiful name for sure :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/21/2016 9:06:00 AM
thank you Isabelle :)-luloo

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