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Carved Hearts

At the footbridge she always read his name along with hers that they had carved together on the wooden side plank. They also had carved two hearts intertwined, though their love met an early end she still meets him in her dreams. When she passes the bridge it brings back those golden memories when they walked together hand in hand. She still watches the pair of swans passing under the footbridge and feels his presence somewhere around watching. When soft snow covers the carving, she wipes off the snow to make his name visible and kisses it with her cold lips. Whenever she feels lonely, she comes to the footbridge, it is now like a shrine to her after his untimely death. July 24, 2016. At The Footbridge - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward 'Free Verse on Love III' Sponsored by:Laura Loo

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Date: 11/2/2017 1:00:00 AM
Congratulation on your win with a fine poem.
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:08:00 AM
So romantic and passionate, thank you and congrats sweet meenakshi :)
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:46:00 AM
Beautifully sad and touching tale of love deserving honor, congratulations Meenakshi...
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Date: 7/25/2016 12:22:00 AM
Beautiful write, Meenakshi! Wonderful imagery and longing is felt in your fine poem. Good luck in the contest:)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 7/25/2016 11:00:00 PM
Thank you Laura...
Date: 7/24/2016 8:06:00 PM
Wow, sad but so beautiful!!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 7/24/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Arthur...

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