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Cart Wheeling Crystals

Snow flakes Tapping glass One by one, Scraping silence From the pane of autumn’s stare Where they gather In mute reflections, Like moths to a flame Blustering into chaotic rhythm White upon light, Cart-wheeling crystals Frozen in free Falling eddies now Gathering upon a wind, In violent whiteout As a fire stares Back from beyond the hearth A sentinel Of warmth bearing Witness to fair warning From an army of Snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/19/2015 5:51:00 PM
this is so filled with clever imagery. Wow, one of my faves of yours. A big FAVE on this one,
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Mark Trichet
Date: 6/19/2015 6:01:00 PM
Hey there Andrea, thnx for the visit on this one. It was one of my early scribbles into poetry...glad you liked it! :)
Date: 7/3/2014 5:19:00 AM
A sublime poem with poetic subliminal touches. Kudos! The last stanza was esp great. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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