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Carry My Shadow

To stop her tears flowing endlessly, remembering eleven years ago, a helpless injured body, beaten By her own hands, smashed her head on the wall, dripping a fountain of blood. That day, she hypnotized her spirit and soul Not to abandon her, but carry her wounded shadow To her doctor, lamenting for help. Her youth was evaporating, she needed to stabilize her elderly emotions, to stop living in the past, if not, her future, will never be lived. Cured Today. She did intercept to abolish Her melancholic delusional thoughts, and involve her dreams To wake up, project a beautiful ambiance. She did nourish her desire not to surrender, to the unhealthy society, but enjoy sharing the love To remain affectionate, even sentimental towards life. She will embark her thoughts To lift her compassion, imagination, and forgiveness, fascinate her existence with The will power, to fight to live. She will then, become strong, befriend her emotions, kindness and sensitiveness, all her loyalties, to allow her soul be occupied, with joy. She will feel the urge to Find a place in time to withdraw, dream how to replenish herself, Forbid her mind to remain ailing, and survive. She will then, live with a mission, become saturated with gratitude Being alive, in the present time. Therese Bacha

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Date: 10/4/2021 5:27:00 AM
Theresa Bacha, besides loving as Mother Theresa loved, your poem is OVERCOMERS Victory in so many ways. Trust Holy Spirit to guide U to victory over any other spirits (All Dis-eases are spirits, as a shorthand I use in teaching EMPOWERMENT) shalom, shalom
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Date: 2/5/2020 3:49:00 PM
whoa..I had to read this one twice..It sounds like it's written about some one who rises from the depths of a deep depression but is resurrected with the will to live. it is so poignantly written..thank you for your talent..
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/29/2020 11:03:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am away for a little while longer and hope to be back soon. Much love Terry xoxo
Date: 1/8/2020 3:39:00 AM
This is such a powerful peace to read, I really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up! :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 2/29/2020 11:03:00 PM
Thank you so much. I am away for a little while longer and hope to be back soon. Much love Terry xoxo
Date: 9/20/2019 5:39:00 PM
Hello Terry!! We are all indeed survivors. At times, it's very easy for some to take counsel of their own fears. Life always presents all of us with certain challenges that often test our individual mettle and our will power to preserve. "Carry My Shadow" is a wondrously honest and moving write. and full of passion. Your message here speaks volumes to the reader. "Being alive in the present time," says it all. Superbly Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. It's a FAVE too!!) -- GB
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/22/2019 1:33:00 AM
Hi Gary, I loved your philosophy between your heartfelt feelings. You know of course that we all pass through ups and down.Before i could find a solution quicker than today, as my aging is starting to become real, and my solutions sometimes help, and other times it is not helping.But i will fight back by getting positive to find writing poems again can help me love again my moments in the now.Terry xoxo
Date: 9/20/2019 8:14:00 AM
This is honest raw and incredibly moving. Welcome back to the soup. Blessings Rick.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/20/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard. Coming out of such an amazing writer, i feel very good. Terry
Date: 4/21/2019 1:12:00 AM
Hi Therese, its like reading your Great Awakening here and you have awoke and answered lifes call. This is a very special write, honest and passionate and i enjoyed reading it. Blessings Carl
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/20/2019 8:41:00 AM
Hi Carl, always faithful, thank you so much. Your sharing review lifts up my moral. Hope to see you soon. Terry
Date: 4/1/2019 10:20:00 PM
We are survivors of self, Therese, and that is the most difficult thing to do ... so many people just don't understand, but I DO, and I commend you for your courage! This is a powerful write, delivered with honesty and candor, and I enjoyed it throughly! Blessings to you! :-) <3
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/1/2019 11:59:00 PM
Hello, first I need to apologize by not replying earlier, as I have been away for a while. Thank you for passing by to review my poem, I enjoyed reading your sharing review. Terry xoxo

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