Carry Hurry

he happy days have gone, The happy days are hard to find, I wish I understood why I feel sad, I can't try to go on, I can't feel the need to carry on, My soul had died and am trying to get out of this sad thought, I need to smile, I need to try and laugh, I need to try and carry on, All those thoughts of pain in my head, All those thoughts of feeling low, All those thoughts of thinking why oh why? I need to smile and carry on.

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Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 12:51:00 PM

SAD WRITE... M LE , Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2010 3:43:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup M. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/27/2010 10:01:00 PM

What you need is a change. We've all been there at some points in our life. You can check my poem, "Sudden Change" if you like, it is kind of about that. Thanks for sharing when things are difficult. I had to check your poem also partly because you last name is Le Croix, you see, my maiden is, Delacroix. Best wishes, Mr, Le Croix, :) Caroline.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 8:38:00 PM

a pick me up will do plenty, nice one