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Carry-On

Sometimes they buy them Other times they kidnap them Because they need small babies To carry their drugs All over the world these dead Babies go, cradled in arms 2/26/12 For "sedoka me any subject" contest Susan Burch

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:05:00 PM

SUSAN... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2012 2:40:00 PM

Interesting work that you have penned..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2012 10:50:00 AM

Hey, Congratulations, Lady!! And thanks so much for my win in your paper/plastic contest!

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/29/2012 9:35:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/29/2012 7:41:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 2/29/2012 10:54:00 AM

Strong write Susan...congrats on your win.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/29/2012 10:38:00 AM

Sad reality of today's society Susan, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/29/2012 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2012 10:41:00 PM

well done witha strong social statement, susan... super cheers to you for hitting the charts! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2012 7:21:00 PM

congrats Susan on a dynamic win for these touching words written for Sedoka luv.. feeling strong emotion...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 3:38:00 PM

Susan, this is GREAT, you are imparting an important social message. The title is really Good!!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2012 12:43:00 AM

Your Sedoka very effectively describes this cruel practice of drug trafficing.Good poem.