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Carriage Driver

From this stark perch, a great divide from those who ride with pinky raised. Inured by wealth; their lives unfazed, quick glances glazed. They see me not. RIDE ON A PATHYA VA - Poetry Contest “Carriage” 04 Aug 2014 David Mohn

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Date: 8/11/2014 4:18:00 PM
Grats on your win!! :)
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:54:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2014 9:15:00 AM
I agree with Nette......this is quite unique, and a different twist in the contest!..........a clever idea, and social statement ! Well done!
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:44:00 AM
you create a stark reality about division of socio-economic classes, david... how unique!.. thanks for supporting my contest and huge cheers on your top win.. huggs
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:21:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme a worthy winner:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/10/2014 7:12:00 AM
Nicely perceived David... Congratulations! 1st Nette placed you... Verlena
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:23:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the contest, Congrats on this great win, david
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Date: 8/5/2014 2:53:00 PM
I really like how you did yours on the division of the classes. Those with raised pinkies. Curses on them. haha!
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