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carriage awaits

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carriage awaits

I sing a song 
On a mountain top, 
holdings hands out 
of angels 

Sweet loving voice, 
finding emotions within 
Like birds 
of song 

to the ball 
Chariot awaits 
Drawn on 
beautiful horses, 
the door opens 

Golden feelings sparkle 
Smiling slowly 
Standing awaiting, 
in the arrival 
Key awaiting 

I beg 
you open 
Entering the heart, 
pleased with wings 
love attached 
a message, 
enter darling 

The heart flutters 
with me 
As one

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  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:19:00 AM
    Im sure i left a comment here ..Ow gee or didn t i?Anyway im sure i read this beauty..Where is that glass slipper?I love these fairytale ending poems.a great escape to magic

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:01:00 PM
    This is every girls dream come true...You are very talented at writing these fairy-tale and fantasy poems. And, it doesn't take a vivid imagination to see the story you want to tell....hope you find your Cinderella soon. Very beautiful piece!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    were did i hide that old glass slipper ha ha wonderful comment deeply appreciated kelly
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 6:38:00 PM
    You take me to a beautiful place alongside you dearest man, bless you for this xxx

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    such a sweet and beautiful comment i thank you ever so kindly deeply appreciated