Carpe Diem

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A year ago I reached a critical point in my treatment path.I placed my hand in God's.(Read Mathew chap 6:25 thru 34 for a better explanation than my monstich precis thereof)

I live in the moment.

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Luis Estable

Date: 8/21/2017 2:45:00 PM

Yes, this is a poem. A poem, on whatever subject can, like this one, have just one line and be a good one. And this is a good one. This little line says much. Live now; live fully for tomorrow we die. PS I have a book on kindle. If you wish a copy, go to Amazon.com and print my name Luis A.Estable or the name of the book, "One Hundred Sonnets, Book Two." Keep on writing those short ones. I like this one much. Luis Estable

Brian Strand
Date: 8/21/2017 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Luis,yes monstichs are a favoured form lfmine,particularly the broken monku