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Carpe Diem

you cant help but feel to failure, presence of nothingness fills your heart, your subconscious mind turns into your enemy, and the heart you stitched together has fallen back apart your head is filled with memories, in which stab your present thought, The smile on your face is artificial, while the pain in your heart remains sought stuck in this state of mind, its hard to let it go you get high to seize the day, because on ground level, your stuck at a low

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Date: 5/16/2009 8:04:00 PM
When you are stuck in the dark for so long it is hard to see that light. A great flowing well written piece.
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Date: 4/2/2009 6:36:00 PM
you discribed this depression to a tee. i love this piece, it is part of me. a patch on my broken heart it shal be. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:12:00 PM
A very well written and thought provoking poem.
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