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Carolina Sunrise

Tides enfold first light, Golden hues seep through briny mist, Daybreak murmurs rest, Ebb and flow dance quietly, Dawn's tender overture sung.

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Date: 5/11/2024 4:16:00 PM

I loved the graceful fluidity of your words. Captivating. Especially liked "Dawn's tender overture song." Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Don Iannone
Date: 5/13/2024 4:45:00 AM

Hi Sara, thank you for reading my poem and the lovely comments. As you can tell, I do enjoy my tankas. Cheers, Don

Date: 5/11/2024 6:13:00 AM

Hey Don you're really good at these little tanka vistas. Nature inspires... endlessly

Don Iannone
Date: 5/11/2024 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Tom. I enjoy writing tankas. Hope you are well. Don

Date: 5/10/2024 11:38:00 PM

Thats just lovely Don! Debx

Don Iannone
Date: 5/11/2024 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Debx!