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Carol

the news i got last week has caused alot of strife they tell me that my sister is going to lose her life as she lays in bed feeling alot of pain wishing she were well but never to be again as i look at her just her formal shell its a life that was so good but now you cannot tell how can i say goodbye to one who was so stong i cant help but feel anger because it just feels so wrong

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Date: 9/18/2010 4:18:00 PM
A very sad poem, very painful to feel like that. Welldone on the write,..p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:01:00 PM
so sorry about this sadness ..beautiful..Take care~Deb
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