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Carol

Carol........I've pined for you my whole life..... You've been the object of my affection and my desires the entire time in high school...... Having you back in my life after almost 16yrs of not knowing where you are or how you're doing, it's rekindled all these old feelings.... I want to kiss you, hold you, pick you up in my arms and carry you..... Carol, after 16yrs of not thinking about you, you're all I can think about again..... Carol, I've told you how I feel about you...... I'm just not sure if I want to find out how you feel about me......

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Date: 4/16/2010 9:05:00 PM
A fine poem of longing
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:44:00 PM
i felt sad when i read this, i know how you feel, the only difference between you and me is that i don't have the courage to tell the guy i like that i like him. it's human nature to be afraid of the unknown, i hope she likes you 'cause you seem like a nice guy and if she's really that good, you deserve her! ------Ell
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