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Carnivore Descends

Burning eyes in the darkest night; sear through the moonlights rays. In the distance, a mournful howling; cracks the air, in two. Transformation complete; the quickening carnivore descends!

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 11/13/2014 8:08:00 PM

Wow! Powerful read! Beautifully penned. It fills the air with action!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:12:00 PM

Wow! Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2014 3:41:00 PM

Very scary work..I wonder what kind of animal this might be?..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:13:00 PM

It's open to interpretation...intentionally. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/9/2014 12:38:00 PM

It has it all... atmosphere, life, death, and suspense. Very good !!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/18/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/5/2014 11:37:00 AM

I like how you never said exzactly what type of carnivore it is... It lft the imagination and mid racing to whatever we want to fit.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/8/2014 1:39:00 PM

It was intentional. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2014 9:28:00 PM

This kind of made me think of a werewolf or something!!! Awesome.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/8/2014 1:40:00 PM

Ah, a good one! Glad you stopped by to read and comment.

James Fraser

Date: 10/30/2014 4:00:00 PM

Reading is like viewing a nature program on Predators, nice one, James :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 6:42:00 PM

Yeah this is good, I can read Sijo's like this one all day.