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Carnival For the Lost Soul

Piqued my soul Carnival playing Visiting Honor hold Wishing for happiness free Piercing heart Playing card Proving other death Falling down Seeing more Taken it all for granted Hurting heart Russell Sivey Entrant into Nette Onclauds contest ~Share a Shadorma~

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/5/2014 4:46:00 AM

misspelled Russell oops! the money signs were on purpose, the lack of L at the end was indeed an accident! PLUS 7 RATE!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/5/2014 4:44:00 AM

just rereading my short list of favorite poems this morning and want to remind you how awesome this piece is Ru$$eL!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/11/2011 3:27:00 PM

this one's got stYle...7rate and to my faves

John Freeman

Date: 8/23/2011 10:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win Russel, I enjoyed your write Rus. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Russell. I love that opening line, piqued my soul!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/23/2011 2:02:00 PM

Congratulations Russel on your win...wonderful approach here.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/23/2011 12:18:00 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/23/2011 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in nette's Shadorma contest. Caryl Ramsdale

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 10:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Share A Shadorma" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 9:22:00 AM

Congrats Russell on your fabulous fifth place win with this elegant entry on carnival.. awesome one..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/23/2011 9:14:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Russell

David Williams

Date: 8/23/2011 4:06:00 AM

hey Russell, congrats on your win, David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2011 10:57:00 AM

I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix Russell. Thank you so much for sharing. Love, Carol

Judy Ball

Date: 8/15/2011 10:53:00 PM

Very well done my friend. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2011 10:02:00 PM

Unique to write on carnival, Russell

Troy Gamble

Date: 8/15/2011 8:16:00 PM

what did you mean by piqued my soul. that is an amazing expression. i loved your poem