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Carnality

The intensity of Their hate Their fate Is blinding, Undermining, Colonising, His existence His subsistence In this world. Burning the hope That kept Shining; Dining Out On his dreams Deemed Unsightly. But nightly Brightly Lightly They exist Within his domain His brain But disdained By those Who slip, slide Hide Cover themselves Their world Their curled up Messed up Washed up Lives In a Cloak of normality Banality Finality Of nothingness A scribbled mess Left To fester In the blackened drawer the whore of their whole. Their soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 4:02:00 AM
Impressive write>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and will be back to read more of it soon Gareth. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2009 4:28:00 PM
I love your flowing rhym, like a river, here sounds something like my poem, Good writ, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2009 3:40:00 PM
Interesting. Sara
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Date: 8/5/2009 3:23:00 PM
OoOoOo great! love the form
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