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Carnal Feelings

My carnal feelings fly sky high as you walk towards me smiling turned on I let out a sigh. Fingers trace down towards my thigh setting my insides quivering my carnal feelings fly sky high. I blush and squirm going all shy the warm flush setting loose feelings turned on, I let out a sigh. I wilt in your arms ending nigh as our passions mix exploding my carnal feelings run high. Emotions running hot and high course through veins like streaked lightning turned on, I let out a sigh. Slowly the world stops revolving tensions freed both now quivering my carnal feelings run high turned on, I let out a sigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/25/2015 8:36:00 AM
Hi Shadow: A very sensual and excellent villanelle. My compliments.
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Date: 10/23/2015 6:24:00 PM
Shadow, oh so hot and sexy, a sweet 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Golden Eagle contest, I am honored ~~
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/23/2015 7:09:00 PM
ty Connie so kind of you hugs
Date: 10/16/2015 2:53:00 AM
These are not easy to express without the lines seeming forced, but you did a splendid job on this beauty!
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Date: 10/14/2015 2:09:00 PM
steamy write shadow.. well done!.. huggs
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:01:00 AM
This is a hot one Shadow!
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Date: 10/14/2015 6:55:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/13/2015 8:50:00 PM
I need a fan!!! Love the sensual write a7 .Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/13/2015 6:54:00 PM
Wow Shadow this sure is a sensual poem:-) Love the impact of the repeated lines:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 10/13/2015 7:37:00 PM
ty Jan it was fun to write hugs

Book: Shattered Sighs