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Carma's Tale

1. Wise owl seeks, Ears perk, squirrel opens, Eye. 2. A perched nest, Eggs lay, hatched Taking place, in, Front and centers, Row,Chasing hens, Birth. 3. A Snail, Slowly, delivers,Race to his, foolish ways, crashing, Cars darkness knee's 4. says the snake, rattles, Tail, quivering, sheets, Behind A crows black, Coat. 5. We all gathered, Feathers, building, Trees of fruit,Along, The fences,of A shiny Red Apple.... By Carma Reed 11-25-12

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Date: 11/26/2012 6:57:00 PM
Carma, haikus or not, they are just nice to read!! Jag
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/27/2012 7:50:00 AM
Thanks much Jag
Date: 11/26/2012 3:10:00 PM
I don't think all of these are true haiku by the definition I learned for haiku, but they stand as sweet poems of reflective thoughts of inspiration, Carma.
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/26/2012 3:26:00 PM
Thanks for the advice Andrea,and I will check into it and fix my pen,and get back to you, Xoxo Carma
Date: 11/26/2012 10:54:00 AM
Carma I agree wholeheartedly...David
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/27/2012 7:49:00 AM
Thank You David

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